Its not your fault
that your gone now, but it did help me
to understand what values you gave to me
though not palpable
these lessons mean more to me
than any other present
i have recived.
never have I ever wanted
anything more than
the knowledge i have know
materialistic things
a camara, a laptop, and even a cellphone,
not important to me
nothing compares to the best gift
of Family, Friends
And people who care
that your gone now, but it did help me
to understand what values you gave to me
though not palpable
these lessons mean more to me
than any other present
i have recived.
never have I ever wanted
anything more than
the knowledge i have know
materialistic things
a camara, a laptop, and even a cellphone,
not important to me
nothing compares to the best gift
of Family, Friends
And people who care
I think that this is a great poem. Its wonderful that you can have a relationship with someone like this, and for you to have gotten so much through the relationship with this person. Your poem really shows how much you care and appreciate them.
ReplyDeletethank you so much for reading and commenting!!!!
DeleteThis is a brilliant poem. It really shows an understanding how people of this generation work, and how we can let technology destroy our connections with people. Job ma'am.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for reading and commenting
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